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Lil Girl Shoping

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simply so...

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a good start

Not bad. It kind of reminded me of those old black and white films with only music and no sound. If that's what you were going for, then you should have also had the captions appear in a black background after each shot, like they did in the old days (for an example, look up Charlie Chaplin on youtube). Anyway, just an idea for you. Nice drawing and stuff too.

Boring

Love your style of drawing, but the movie was rather lame.

I'm sure you can do better. So, a 4, and a 1.

Don't know

The drawing style was pretty good as BizarroJoe said but the music was kind of annoying. If the music was chosen for a reason then i can understand it. The point of the story was pretty bad. Maybe with voices it would have been a little better but I think not. The overall is 5/10 and most of it is for the visuals of course.

well

the music gave me a seizure

Ok, needs improvement, but fine...

Nice visuals but the joke is rather bad and the style is not enough to lift it up too much... Also, put an stopallsounds in the first frame to avoid getting nuts at replaying...
Anyway, it really has potential; your stylish drawings are way to go. I´m sure that the next one will be better.

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Sep 11, 2007
12:38 PM EDT