Lol

That was funny
"realy whod you hurt?' "You"

((( OK )))

This was ok, good work on the "CHARACTERS" and there design and all, haha the ending was funny though, the "VOICES" were good but could be better, they are not bad just could use more to them...

~X~

pretty erotic

when i watched melvin i undresses him/her with my eyes and id rather see it done on my screen so i wuldve preferred the goats and goblins naked or wearing tight clothing. i liked the bit here it sed the end coz it didnt and im not sure if it did or not i swear i watched it a million times.

Good

Not Bad But those voices were a bit much after a bit keep up the good work and you mite have a career in flash ahead of you

4

I have to admit that I like the concept of one central character and various things happening to him in a series. In this episode, we see a character named Melvin asked by a yet to be named character why he is having a bad day. It sounds promising and with some work, could be pretty fine. The voices really were annoying and did not seem to fit in with the movie. Heck, they dragged on for way to long and just bugged me. The artwork was basically two characters with little more than just a few unsynched lip movements and that was it in regards of motion. It shows promise and you can only improve. Good luck in the series.

Ryan