oH MAN!
The ending was so funny I couldn't stop laughung... also try to make the sound a little better.
Reviews for "Melvin:Bad Day"
Its ok
Its alright..its not bad but I didn't think it was too interesting.
Reaaaaaallly?
Wow, didn't expect that at the end-pretty funny. You did a fairly good job animating, but I wanted to see the other dude's expression change more than just the mouth movements. Also, as a tip, when you're doing voice overs, make sure you use the cloth-dealyos (I forgot what they're called, but they go over the mic) so that it won't record the things like breath or wind, which happened a couple of times. Next time, try to speed the conversation up a bit more; I know you were trying to drag out for the sake of making the other guy irritating, but it was a bit too slow for my liking. Anyways, nice job with this flash. I hope to see another one.
Not bad.
Took a while to get to the punch line, as the person before me mentioned... It was worth it when it got there though. PErhaps a little more animation, and for the love of God, a less annoying voice for Melvin's friend.
Not bad at all
You really should make this into a series. Few nitpicks though. Please color the teeth white, it just bugged me that they were the same color as their skin. Also clean up the sound. Overall, i can see the series going places. You'll improve your style over time :) Up-up-and-away!