Heh.
I like the punchline. The kid talking to Melvin was a little bit too annoying for my tastes; cut out some of his dialogue to make the film snappier overall.
Heh.
I like the punchline. The kid talking to Melvin was a little bit too annoying for my tastes; cut out some of his dialogue to make the film snappier overall.
Lick Chodes Bastard
Why do everytime i click on flash portal looking for some cool new flashes i see shit like this. go die
Not Bad
I enjoyed the end, but the voice of melvin's friend was REALLY annoying ;)
Try and pick up the pace next time- the punch line was funny, but it took a little while to get there.
Overall, nice work- I would like to see a few more Melvin movies.
the ending killed me
it was good for a few laughs but the ending where he punched the guy was hilarious
it waz ok
just make the sound & graphics better