Not too bad, although it actually needed some better organised structure
Not bad for a start
The name is nothing like what I expected.
Are you seriously just learning? For a beginner that was exellent. I really like it, although you could have made it a bit longer. Keep going though!
For someone who's just learning you did damn well there, keep it up and youre definatly gonna get good at this. Well done and keep up the good work.
there's a series here...
that was real quality work for you being so new to flash. Since everyone else has pretty much given you what I have to say in their reviews, I'll just add my compliments because noone can ever get too many compliments, and you deserve 'em