Not bad, but It's not too original. Just a different version of loads of different stories.
I fell sorry for the dude:.......(
I'd really like to get the book if u writed it in pc,plaese malime,il send u my e-mail in a pm
would like to get your book :D im impressed with this.. umm... well what ever it is
I liked it, had fairly smooth animation, and the storyline was alright. It's left a little to be desired, but not as much as those 'gung-ho' 'hero walks into a room and kills 30 bad guys with 9 bullets and a packet of cigs' cartoons (looks at Madness). You certainly have talent, I'm sure of that. I actually liked this more than the recent halo spoof you did, even if that did have slightly better animation and a better storyline (not written by you, though ;)). The reason for that: this actually felt fairly powerful.
What was the music that was playing in the first half of the animation? I wanted to use it in one of my animations. Thanks for the effort in making the animation and for the reply to my query which I hope will be delivered post-haste. :)
I really want to read the story! Are you going to put it up on a site?