I'll give you all 10s, so that you're not angry...
1. Why not blind the kid?
2. Why try to save him?
3. Too CORNY with the girl and the one day
4. The music is WAY overused and personally makes me sick
5. Too much text
I don't want to get you down - I know how that feels. Just understand that this is constructive critizism. Good graphics, by the way.