... ... ... ...and... then what...?
Great animation at the beginning of the piece. ..Again, I'm not a fan of stick-figure-like pieces, but at least the people had some thickness to them.
The problem is, though, that this piece seems to want to end on a climax that will get viewers to ask, "Oh my Gosh?!!,...What happens next?!!"... The feeling I got from this was more like, "Oh my Gosh... ... ... ...and,...what else...?"
It's almost like this piece was the beginning of a novel where all you got was, "It's the year 2007," and that's it. "What about the year 2007?" "What's the importantce of this event happening?" "Why should I ask for more?"
Lastly, I would suggest using cueing buttons for the text so that the text wasn't going by too fast for outside viewers. When I'm done reading what someone is saying, I want to be able to choose when to continue, especially if my wife walks into the room topless, or if I'm watching a good show of sorts.
Again,...These are just suggestions... It's all up to the creator to decide how much he/she wants to put into this. If you have a complete storyline to go with this...Go With It!!!