great intro
well overall good start. but opening scenes are usually more about the scenery, uve just got a black background... delay it before you get into the whole phone ringing thing, like just show his eyes opening or the side of his face as he brings the phone to his ear.
Love the sound, goes perfectly but the speach is too quick to read. slow it down, this could be good if you spent more time in the actual animation.
:D cya!