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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-07 19:36:43


At 12/7/07 06:37 PM, Lindione wrote: How many years have you been writing: a month I've been writing poetry/ short stories but I've been thinking up stories in my head for a long time, just haven't written them down.
How many flash story's you have written: none
How many real life story's you have written: working on a story/poem (i can put in what i got if you like)

Well, I'm not very experienced but I'd like to join and learn how to write better if ya can use me.

So if I understand you are a poet? That is great if so, I am too one. If you ever need some tips look me up.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-07 21:29:22


It is 8:30 here, and I ahve desided to try something.
I call this a poemlet
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"!"
A mark of great emotion.
A feeling worth being yelled.
A cause of great commotion.
A showing of being swelled.
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I am going to try to write 20 of these tonight and somehow put them together.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-07 21:46:22


Fixed the ! one, and made one for "."

"!"
The mark of great emotion.
The feeling worth being yelled.
The cause of a great commotion.
The showing of being swelled.

"."
The mark of the end.
The sentence waves a tearful farewell.
The halt to a messing blend.
The new sentence it shall foretell.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-07 22:13:59


At 12/7/07 09:29 PM, SprintT wrote: It is 8:30 here, and I ahve desided to try something.
I call this a poemlet
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"!"
A mark of great emotion.
A feeling worth being yelled.
A cause of great commotion.
A showing of being swelled.
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i lol'd.

thats real good.

although i like it better when each line starts with 'a' rather than 'the'


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-07 23:16:22


Hi, can i join?

I love writing, have for about 3 years.
I haven't written any flash, but ive written some short stories for school and a few personal shorts.
Just call me Seggi.

Anyway, can i join?

Response to Writers Club 2007-12-07 23:26:59


At 12/7/07 11:16 PM, Seggi wrote: Hi, can i join?

I love writing, have for about 3 years.
I haven't written any flash, but ive written some short stories for school and a few personal shorts.
Just call me Seggi.

Anyway, can i join?

Welcome, and on another note.
The third peice is done:
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"?"
The mark of great wonder.
The symbol to create pleads.
The want for the answer is like a great hunger.
The closure the beholder needs.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-07 23:43:16


At 12/7/07 11:26 PM, SprintT wrote:
The third peice is done:
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"?"
The mark of great wonder.
The symbol to create pleads.
The want for the answer is like a great hunger.
The closure the beholder needs

I preferred the one on the period, but i like the last line of the question mark

Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 00:06:58


At 12/7/07 11:43 PM, Seggi wrote:
At 12/7/07 11:26 PM, SprintT wrote:
The third peice is done:
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"?"
The mark of great wonder.
The symbol to create pleads.
The want for the answer is like a great hunger.
The closure the beholder needs
I preferred the one on the period, but i like the last line of the question mark

That is my favorite too XD But I wanted to do it for all of them.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 12:05:21


At 12/7/07 05:32 PM, gunground wrote: Welcome Skater Girl! Sorry for the long response time, I was hooked up with academic expectations and other calamities. But welcome aboard :)

Thanks! Usually, I write my stories on paper, so once I get back to school on Monday, I'll ask my English teacher for my Halloween story.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 13:13:18


Guys tonight get on MSN so we all can compare ideas. Me, Lazypint, and sry forgot the third persons NG name did it last nite, and it was great. So come on people lets have a chat.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 13:51:13


I haven't been on for ages because my comp is down and therefore I have been unable to write. I'll be back on Tuesday at the earliest.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 16:12:54


At 12/7/07 07:36 PM, SprintT wrote:
At 12/7/07 06:37 PM, Lindione wrote: How many years have you been writing: a month I've been writing poetry/ short stories but I've been thinking up stories in my head for a long time, just haven't written them down.
How many flash story's you have written: none
How many real life story's you have written: working on a story/poem (i can put in what i got if you like)

Well, I'm not very experienced but I'd like to join and learn how to write better if ya can use me.
So if I understand you are a poet? That is great if so, I am too one. If you ever need some tips look me up.

Yea if its poetry you seek this is the place to be
Because we got styles of every kind you see
You can rhyme yours out & be more like me
Or you can have sophisticated poems & be like SprintT

Pt. made in poetry form...

Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 17:02:31


At 12/8/07 04:12 PM, Skilla wrote: Yea if its poetry you seek this is the place to be
Because we got styles of every kind you see
You can rhyme yours out & be more like me
Or you can have sophisticated poems & be like SprintT

Pt. made in poetry form...

Nice XD
I was wondering where you disapeared too. I'm telling you though you are killing me with the "&" :P

Anyways got a msn or AIM skilla?


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 17:04:00


Usually, I write down the first word that comes to mind, then I write a story about it.

How do you guys come up with your stories?


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 17:12:19


At 12/8/07 05:04 PM, Sk8erGirl13 wrote: Usually, I write down the first word that comes to mind, then I write a story about it.

How do you guys come up with your stories?

Me, I usually get inspired by something I'm interested in. Like, in 7th grade, I was fascinated with the M-1 Garand rifle, and I ended up starting (and never finishing) a novel where a kid finds one in a war during the year of 20XX, and gets some magical powers.

Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 17:13:46


At 12/8/07 05:04 PM, Sk8erGirl13 wrote: Usually, I write down the first word that comes to mind, then I write a story about it.

How do you guys come up with your stories?

Well my best peice was enspired by some people walking in my schools hallway. And the poemlets were inspired by me tryping a "!" so, I never know what will inspire me.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 17:18:52


At 12/8/07 05:04 PM, Sk8erGirl13 wrote: Usually, I write down the first word that comes to mind, then I write a story about it.

How do you guys come up with your stories?

1. I take a done-to-death concept, then spice it up a little
eg. A guy gets his family murdered, is out for revenge. Tweaks are: He's black, he's timid and the majority of his face has been blown off by a shotgun blast.
eg 2. Werewolves versus vampires. Tweaks are: They're street gangs full of sub-18 year olds.

2. I take a theme, then create a story that relates ever so slightly to that theme. Then said theme makes a direct occurrence/appearance every now and again.
eg. Incest, bravery, conquering death, good versus evil.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 17:38:31


Do I post here enough XD
Anyways here is the 4th poemlet, I'm going to do faces now.
The ones I'm going to do are "XD" ";)" "-_-" ":3"
Here is "XD"
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"XD"
The expression of a humorous joy.
The many reasons, any could be.
The worst is of such, that of annoy.
The showing is of such glee.
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The other three i'll post at once, once all done to cut bak on posting.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 20:45:26


you, sprintt, are ridiculous. and i love you for it.

as for my inspirations, i really don't know. the closest i could get would be to say that i get crazy ideas that tend to become stories on their own while jogging w/ my dog at night.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 21:26:41


Well, I've finally gotten around to writing my part of Skilla's story. If you want a reference point, it's on page 40. Also, don't plan on this being my best work, but you never know

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"What?!" Arthur Jennings yelled into his phone, causing his sleeping wife to stir and ask what was the matter. It was 3 A.M., and a police officer had just informed Arthur that the bank he owned, Messenger Bank, was robbed.

"Ass fucking Christ! I just fucking received a fucking requesting for more fucking money. Fuck!" Now a light went on in his neighbor's home. But Arthur didn't care; a little sleep lost didn't compare to the money lost. "Seventy fucking thousand dollars! You have got to be fucking kidding me! Awww, Christ!"

Arthur quickly got dressed, donning a pair of old, faded and thinning sweat pants and a hooded sweat shirt, not worrying about a shirt or underwear. But when he stepped outside to begin the trek to the bank, he realized how important the latter was on this winter night. Snow was beginning to fall, and already the light, white powder dusted the tiny front yard.Fuck it, I'll be warm soon enough

He drove off to the the Bank, passing parked car, and occasionally another midnight driver, wondering the roads, trying to get home from a party, work, or to pick up a necessity for the wife or child. At one point, he passed a man on a motorcycle. "How the fuck can he do that? It's got to be twenty fucking degrees outside!" Mr. Jennings wondered aloud. He turned up the heat, and enjoyed it's comfort.

As Arthur arrived at the Messenger Bank, a few cop cars had already arrived, and taped off the crime scene. After sloppily parallel parking his SUV, he speed walked over to the nearest officer, to find out what happened.

"Sir, calm down. I know you have just been robbed, but it will be alright; we'll catch that bastard for you. We just need some information." The officer said. His attempt at calming the infuriated owner proved futile. "Fine. I'll tell you whatever the fuck you want. But let's go the fuck inside; I'm freezing my fucking balls off out here." Literally Arthur thought, not wanting to tarnish his angered and in command persona in front of a stranger.

"Sorry, sir, but this is a crime scene. You aren't allowed in." The officer stated, as if he had saidthat many times before. He got out a pen and paper to take notes.

"Fuck that! I'm going in! I want to see what the fuck that fucker did to my fucking bank!" Arthur went around the policeman, heading straight for the bright yellow cation tape, hoping his sudden movement would allow him to gain the upper hand in the foot race that was about to ensue. "Wait, you can't go in there!" the officer called after him, turning around to catch up the the now jogging Jennings.

Jennings beat the officer to the door of the bank, and flew past the officers inspecting the lock on the open door. Arthur looked at the door with some regret for not adding more locks to that door. He went into the actual bank and saw more police officers, more than what he had initially thought. Some where taking pictures of everything, whether it had to do with the path the robber took or not, while others dusted for finger prints along every inch of the building. But Jennings made a bee-line for the back room, and when he saw that only the small safe was broken into, he was overwhelmed with joy.

Finally, the officer from outside caught up with Mr. Jennings, and proceeded to question him; his name, address, relation with the building, any possible suspects, the usual questions used to see find out more about the robbery. The officer ended with a "Thanks very much. We'll get your money back soon enough." and left Arthur to get back home.

When Arthur got back home, it was 4:30 in the morning; half an hour before he usually got up to get ready to open the bank at 8 AM. He sat on the coach downstairs, and turned on the TV. The only thing on was an infomercial for a vacuum with "10 times more suction and 5 times more dirt storage capacity than the leading brand", and Sportscenter, neither of which particularly struck a fancy in Arthur. He was too worried about what would happen to his money, and because of that, he couldn't go back to sleep. He couldn't notify his employees; although Arthur Jennings was a slave-driver at the bank, he wasn't a "asshole", as so commonly called by his employees when they thought their boss was out of earshot.

So, Arthur was left to sit and

Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 22:41:44


Ok my first story poem here i hope you guys like it

Poem 1: The "So Called" Holy Man

There was once a young man with a decision
Which he would regret for eternity
If he did not make it with precision

He listened to a so called holy man out of pity
On his way down a road to accomplish his unknown and shadowy mission
Of which contents were located in the Salome, the great city

It was apparent this man was from the following of Eden
A power and religion within the vicinity

"Brother, come join the following of Eden
With a benevolent and loving goddess
Who will reward the great and punish the heathens
And with brothers like me to guide the lost and powerless
We will never prefer to work and toil
We always party and enjoy life
Before the goddess' gifts of joy spoil"

The young man thought about this proposition
And what Eden had done to him in the past
Ruling with their promises of hope and with the people's attrition
And with that attrition stole his family with a deception and a large blast

The young man was nearly about to set out
When the so called holy man gave a warning
"The merciless rebels are about
Their words of truth and revolution are ensnaring"

And with those words the young man set out daring
To accomplish his mission the consequences of which he was uncaring...

(the first part here i made 2 weeks apart from the other poems so the structure and stuff is a little off than the rest of them)

Poem 2: The Lost Fiance

That night was the time for his decision
Between something which he thought he lost
And his ever important mission

Near where the roads crossed
He saw an encampment the so called rebels
The group called Elron dressed in green and black

He hid among the bushes and pebbles
For this groups identity he would try and crack
When he saw a familiar face from the past

His fiancé Evett was in the encampment
Whom he thought died when fates die was cast
The time Eden attacked with resentment

She approached her lost love cautiously and said
"Oh how this moment I both love and fear
Your discovery of where I am, you must dread
But the fact that we live we both hold dear"

The young man promised to return
After he accomplished his mission on both sides of the law
But for many days on the road he would yearn

For his love, his muse, to whose allegiance he was in awe

Poem 3: The High Lord of Eden

The young man woke up and saw a sight
A charismatic leader of Eden the high lord himself perhaps
Dressed in red and flaunting his grace and might

This was the way to his mission he had no need for maps
His journey there was almost at its end
Yet now his attention turned to the man in the stunning red silk dress

But from what he was hearing he was a lout who would only intend
To order his servants and chat up his maidens with success
And not be a man of the cloth like he was obligated to

The young knew his chance this time
And decided to find the back of his caravan and pursue
The man who had committed in his eyes the ultimate crime

He caught up to the so called "holy lord" and said to explain his actions
For the atrocities he committed the responsibilities he shirked
And so the silk man would say he wasn't involved with these factions

The way in which he spoke with near a magical tone he worked
"I know I may look like a fool and a lout
Trying to have fun while I should be overworking myself
But it is the way of Eden and her way is devout"

The young man tried to control himself
With his silvery eyes he summoned a vision of a storm
But the holy lords had his guards attack and seize the young man

Yet the young man knew with a leader this way there must be reform.


"Any state, any entity, any ideology that fails to recognize the worth, the dignity, the rights of man, that state is obsolete."

Don't bother using the bible as an argument.

Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 22:43:02


continuation of the last post

Part 4: The prison illusion

The young man woke up in a small dungeon cell
Next to a restless shell of a man that has looks beyond his years
Based on his clothes and the way he apparently died the place he was an old rebel

He must escape somehow and he must hold back his fears
For he knew he would get out and accomplish his task
The decided the first thing he would do as the guard advanced

He went to the guard and to be separated from the rebel he would ask
His real purpose was to look at him with his silver eyes and make the guard entranced
With the images of his false goddess talking to him

After the guard saw the young man as his goddess the vision he enhanced
So he maybe could grab the key although the chances were slim
He got it with ease the guard being of weak mind

And the young man made his vision ask for an escape route which the guard replied
"There is a guard dog only on your way out but he is blind
And the other guard around here died
By your will as he was stealing from the luxury box of all our treasures"

First the young man made the guard pass out
And to make his escape he took the appropriate means and measures
Found the black robe which was customary to wear in the religious season of drought

He escaped into the city, Salome from the paintings he saw
And went to stay the night at a dusty motel
This was his last chance to withdraw

But he could not; he must accomplish his mission even if he must say to all farewell


"Any state, any entity, any ideology that fails to recognize the worth, the dignity, the rights of man, that state is obsolete."

Don't bother using the bible as an argument.

Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 22:44:03


Part 5: The Fall of Eden

The young man got up with a confident heart that morning
He put on some white clothing and his silver necklace
And got up noticing and crow and a vulture soaring

He walked up to the high temple brave but not reckless
Stepped in front of the high alter his person watched
Unbeknownst to the young man the great drought ceremony was today

With every Eden follower there the mission might be botched
And certainly the guards would try to make him pay
But with all these people came an inspiration

He drew as much attention to himself as he could
On this day of their so called "salvation"
Break the high lord resolve he would

He said these words to the high lord that day
"I say to you wretched crook
Beg for the mercy of your goddess you may
For what from me and my town you took"

He said no more and with silver eyes glowing began his powerful vision
Of the ultimate truth behind this evil religion and power
He would destroy the fear and attrition with precision

The high lord's soul this vision would devour
Ruining his mind and driving him insane
The crowd was dispersed and now living in peace

Now he must complete the prophetic mission which he will now disdain
With the knowledge of some new information


"Any state, any entity, any ideology that fails to recognize the worth, the dignity, the rights of man, that state is obsolete."

Don't bother using the bible as an argument.

Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 22:44:13


At 12/8/07 09:26 PM, TheThing wrote: So, Arthur was left to sit and

Whoops, forgot to finish it:

So, Arthur was left to sit and wait for the sun to come up, and for the robber to be caught.

Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 22:49:44


At 12/8/07 10:41 PM, Lindione wrote: Ok my first story poem here i hope you guys like it

Nice job, cant wait to see the rest.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 23:04:31


fuckin epic, lindione, good job, cant wait 2 see more

*is elated*


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-08 23:49:26



Nice XD
I was wondering where you disapeared too. I'm telling you though you are killing me with the "&" :P

Anyways got a msn or AIM skilla?

yup I got Aim

The names

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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-09 01:08:09


2 parts to a free verse poem
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Holy Works

Misshapen soul
Upon the decollate lands of thy false heavens a misshapen soul lies upon the ground.
The freedom to be feared, yet the choice to be had, escape is the need. Yet the will is of greed; although for the sake of many a soul the greed must also be the need.

The freedom must be what is to transpire. The entrapment upon this most unholy of sacred lands must come to an end. For the very foundations of the righteous cause have rotted, and soured. The word must be spread, and yet the though can not fully transpire.

The thoughts of the unbeliever dwell upon the souls mind, and yet have not fully consumed. The belief has been a false, and yet the soul shall not let go. The meaning still stands even after then faith has frayed.

Contemplation is the souls greatest oppressor, and yet its path to freedom. The choice to be had is not a simple one. To give up all that is known as much of a false it is, or to live a life built upon lies, and deception. One will be the easier rout, and the other shall be the daring rout that will forever shape a misshapen soul.

The vigorous strain of the great weight of the burden could crush the fragile soul at anytime. The beckoning of the truth is too much for the listener to ignore though. How can the cries of the truth imploring the listener to take to arms, and fight for truth fall on death ears. This great mistake would be a great tragedy; although the worry is not needed.

The empowered soul steps up, and grasps the challenge. The time is now, and the need is great, for the greed although present is not entirely true. To die for a cause is better then being deceived, and the soul is ready to break the chains that bond so many to the lies.

A false given name
The ever healing touch of the devil's hand, how it shapes the broken soul. The truth is to be told for the label on the opposing side is an unjust one. The name given upon what lords of heavens call a curse is forever unjust. The lies that have been spun to keep the truth locked away are thick, and time it is for the truth to be told. The one that the lord's call the devil is in fact the true righteous one; although truly understood he has not ever been.

Long ago to keep the truth behind their lies the lords locked away a young man for trying to expose the truth, and then stripped him of his earth given name. The man was turned into the symbol for the faiths fate, and forever would remain as long as the will for it was present.

Only when the will of the one soul that took a grave stand was broken the chance came. The misshapen one was given shape to be the minstrel of the loathed one's word. To tell that of a great tragedy, that of a misdoing that would cause the bravest of men to turn tail and run.

The truths behind the lies, the greatness behind weakness, but the people would not believe. The path that one follows as a believer is not their own. Free though has deprived of the followers of the lord. The truth would fall upon death ears.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-12-09 08:47:39


Holy crap, you guys made three pages in a day! I can't keep up with everyone, so I'll just post this thingy.
*clears throat*
Famous Quotes.
Arranged by yours truely.
We will bury you.
Muffins.
The British are coming.
Your momma.
Here's Johnny!
There's no fighting in here, this is the war room!

Let them eat cake.
You are an idiot.
and, the finale,
You got OWNED!!!!
*sips water*
Thank you.
Oh, one more.
Cock joke.


To be or not to be....

You get the idea.

Response to Writers Club 2007-12-09 09:35:06


lol. What does this have to do with anything?