Here's a thing that I started out liking, but now I just think it's decent. I like the theme of the song and the diction used in the second verse, though.
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Lyrics as always:
Retrospective looking-glass
I wanna go back and kick my ass
There're several errors in the coding
An HTML site won't finish loading
That's just fuckin' sad.
Who ever thought that life could be so bad?
So many paths to take
I can't find my own way
Who would I be?
If I wasn't me.
(I built a time machine.)
(Inside my mind, ya see?)
Watching all the unobtained,
Float away out of reach
A scow of decomposed remains
Abnegated by the beach
The waves frighten me.
I never thought I'd ever want to set out to sea.
So many paths to take
I can't find my own way
Who would I be?
If I wasn't me.
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Made using my trust acoustic guitar, vocal cords, and, of course, Audacity.
Hope you enjoyed!
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.