Really good job man.
So at 1:05 there's the transition from verse to chorus right? The progression changes and the lyrical chorus starts. But it's almost unnoticeable that a new section has started because there's no change in the tone of your voice or guitar. So the verse and chorus blends together.
When you get to the part where you sing "Entropy! Hey yeah entropy... three cheers for entropy!" you open up and I feel you more. You're more expressive when you get to that part. The way you play the guitar and sing changes.
So if that's the chorus... and the part of the lyrics where you repeat "fading" is some sort of bridge... I hear it being played no different from the other verses.
FEAR THE REAPER!@!!@@! THAT'S WHAT I WAS REMINDED OF. WHERE'S THE COWBELL THO??!?!
Hey man, no solo? The song works well without one but couldn't help but think this would be a fun progression to play lead for.