Not bad. Some parts were too loud. For instance, at 0:45, the volume just "jumped" out of nowhere. Also, at 3:38 that last note was too loud and obnoxious. A general guideline is if a note is long, hit it and back off.
You need to learn to add a complex drumbeat when intense parts come, a kick and a clap is not everything!
And yet I thought I was fine with being simple
I guess I have to try with the drum beats
As in practice more with it
I am trying to extend demonic angel
Melody's are good but you need to put that distortion melody kick in tip try putting the the distortion kick with a bass sound on top of it so heavy bass plus distort kick over all great
POussver ! that's a nice tune man, and it's original !