Hmm.

Ah, I remember you! I reviewed a piece of yours that I thought was pretty jolly.

Articulation in your vocals is much better (well, as it should when family isn't 'round, eh?). The reverb you used felt a tad bit too much for my tastes. Though, seeing as this is a classic rock piece, it felt more like a simulation of a stage, as if you were putting on a live show, right here, right now.

The only thing is that there's a disconnect between the guitar and the vocals. The reverb on the acoustic is much more tame and subtle as opposed to the vocals, which sound much more lush and have more warmth. They should be, in all technicality, occupying the same space, so there should be the same amount of reverb. Technically.

I think in this case, less is more - matching the verb on the guitar with the vocals since they sound a bit too spacey. Just me, of course.

Keep focusing on your voice. Belting it out is very good, just keep with trying to be consistent. I hear some extra modulation from your diaphragm when your pushing to hit the notes.

Otherwise, pretty awesome. Love me some acoustic guitar ;)

-J.P.

Upbeat songs made sad by classical guitar, well, it's a very interesting concept indeed :D

Also, I would like to request "Tripping Billies" by Dave Matthews Band for a sad cover.