Well this one's interesting. At first it sounded like something out of a video game, and then the track morphed into something R&B. I liked the overall atmospheric elements into this, along with the beat. I love that sliding high pitched synth a lot. That sounded really good...

The only downside was how abruptly it just cut off. I'd advise you figure out how to end this better. Maybe something to echo off or fade out. Other than that, lengthen it if necessary. This track could use a bit more work I think. :)

Very very cool! I absolutely love jazzy compositions and weird grooves, this is totally my style of off beat music. And I think if the chorus was a little bit more groove oriented, like less heavy it would fit more with the rest of the song a bit better. But that is more of a stylistic choice, I think it still works.

Really cool stuff man! Definitely will keep track of you!

i think your bedroom is much clearer then mine(sorry im not good in english), if i would make a song of mine it will be hard rock or very hard dubstep...:)

This is real good. The way it starts off and then what it goes off into was slightly surprising at first, but it works well for the song I think. Perfect for a rap instrumental or something along those lines, but also very good to listen to on it's own. Great variation, and great mixing. Really like the vocals used, gives the song a bit more grove and substance. I wish it was a bit longer, but that's pretty much the only bad thing I can say about it. Extremely solid track!