Author Comments

hey, this is my entry for the NGAUC, thankfully @TaintedLogic let me know about the contest, i've been missing out on alot i bet, i've been so busy with work and my social life so i finally decided to take some time off and make music again after a slight break.

let me know what you think below !!
- Pandasticality

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== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

OMG... these chords are so gooddd. Half of the melody when it comes in is really amazing, but the other half is out of tune. Argh! (I disagree with the other reviews, btw - a whistle is totally fine for the lead here.) 8.5 - could have been like a 9.5 if the melody was totally in tune - it's like turning in an english essay with typos!

Mini-scores (Note: See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)

* Mixing: 3/4
* Composition: 3/4 (Easy 4/4 with the above fixed)
* Arrangement: 3/4

Pandasticality responds:

thank you for the tip, i already noted up the earlier reviews tips for when i start a new project :)
thank you for the review! hopefully il get to the next round.

- Pandasticality

I agree with foxypanda69 about a lead not tearing through the track and setting it on fire. Not to say that this wasn't a hot track, I think it's hella awesome! I think a nice lead coming in with some hi-hats and a stronger snare would've made this track amazing. Still 5/5 from me just cuz I still think it's awesome. Nice work!

Pandasticality responds:

thanks for the tips !! i haven't done that much future bass yet but im definantly planning to do more, il take all the tips to my notes while im working on more tunes : ) thank you very much !

- Pandasticality

Your chord progressions are awesome! The only constructive criticism I could give would be to work on leads. So badly I wanted to hear a lead come ripping through that melody and just capture me, but literally everything else in this track was on point. Great work! :3

Pandasticality responds:

thank you! il definantly work on my leads, thnx for the tip.
- Pandasticality

Nice :)

Pandasticality responds:

thanks! n__n hope you liked it.
- Pandasticality

Credits & Info

4.83 / 5.00

Jul 8, 2015
1:52 PM EDT
New Wave
File Info
5.1 MB
2 min 14 sec

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