Very impressive flow! I agree with SourJovis those small flaws are nice. Doesn't sound so "cookie-cutter".
Great writing and performance, everything matches really well!
Thanks! What do you mean by "cookie-cutter"? Do you mean generic? If so, thanks again! :)
Great song. You say the song suffers from "bad production". I agree sometimes can't understand the lyrics, because they're too drowned out by the effects and other instruments, and the drums are sometimes out of rhythm. But overall I actually like the production because of "flaws". This gives a more human touch and it reminds me more of classic rock songs. When a song is overproduced it gets boring.
That guitar is so crystal clear! I've tried recording some guitar myself lately.. but my recording equipment consists of a cheap headset. If you don't mind me asking, what did you use to record this? I'm investing in a new external sound card soon and it would be nice to know what you used to get that crisp sound.
Also the vocals around 0:58. Fucking spot on! makes me think of rob zombie in some cases aswell as other industrial metal vocals. Brilliant work!
I'm usually not a fan of this genre, but this was fucking amazing.But I think the section around 0:58 till 1:19 feels a little out of place for me. (even though the lyrics are wicked)
The introduction was fantastic! The melding of the guitar and the bass was very effective, and the vocals reminded me of Alice in Chains (especially around 0:40). When it starts to pick up the vocals get to be a little too much for me (screaming for example)...though that's just for me I would imagine. Overall though, the vocals are great (the laughing at the end was a cool touch!) and the lyrics are quite creative. Getting back to the guitar, very nice riffs and the presentation is nice and clear. Like you have mentioned, the drums are a little bit shaky but it's not a big deal. I think this is a solid song, great work! :)
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