I like the bright-sounding guitars and underlying cinematic vibe this has. Almost sounds like an anime soundtrack. The element of suspense is nice, and there also lots of cool riffs like at :42. Sometimes I think the synths and guitars are fighting against each other a little too much, though, especially since they're both pretty staccato-y and frantic. I'm really liking the added intensity by around 2:20, especially since that section had a more melodic flair. I'm looking forward to hearing the vocals! Seems like it's a piece worthy of some storytelling to go along with it. :) Keep it up, MetalRenard! ^^

I like your use of the keyboard in this piece. It helps develop that sci-fi effect you're going for, and in general plays along well with the rest of the instruments. Your riffs are also strong and loud, boosting the overall intensity of the song. The complex rhythms to go along with it are intriguing as well, and the quality of the audio is very polished.

The piece in general could use a little more variety however. What you have is great, but more changes in such as the song structure, instruments, and possibly key or tempo could better maintain your listener's interest. Adding vocals like you stated in your description is a great start at achieving this. Your transition at 2:30 is a solid example of what you could use to build upon and change up your composition a bit.

All in all, I think you did a good job on this piece. With a little more development, this could be an excellent song.

Average: 81%

Sick. I wonder what it would sound like with lyrics. Oh well. Great job as always man. Keep up the awesome. :)

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I honestly prefer instrumentals and THIS IS WHY! I love the mix of instruments and the cool drums! The bass and synths are great and blend so well! To say nothing of the actual guitar!