You hit a lot of the words on the list but the rhymes aren't great and your diction is pretty mumbly and off-beat. I think part of this is due to the 'lazy brass' in the beat and overall it gives the song a rough sloppy feel to it... Which would be okay if it were easier to understand. The issue is that it's not.
Thanks man, I appreciate this great feedback you've been given me. I hear ya on the poor diction and weakness in clarity; I can barely understand a lot of my older works without squintin my ears. Ill be workin on improving it in le future.
I like this beat. Cool lyrics....
"I'll spin you in 36 chambers, "Wu" the revolutions never end"
Legendary line right there
2 thumbs up (-b.' ')-b
Keep pushing guy
Wu hoo!!Thanks for listen Wings!
its rapy and cool nice work man
Rapy? SWEET!!! Thanks for the comment ggm12345
This shit is dope I dont know but when I hear this I think Aesop Rock it might be the beat maybe the flow. But good track all together dude.
Thanks Glitch! Aesop is a favourite of mine, so I probably have subconsiously bit a bit at his style. Glad you liked the track, stay tuned man.
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