Nimbus - Wouldn't have gotten the song references if I hadn't seen the quotes in the lyrics. Wasted a lot of bars talking about semen, it's a major minus. Second verse has the flips but they don't sting. Overall his verses seem more like a research paper than a battle.
Mao - The clitoris line is a real eye-roller, the advantage you have over Nimbus is that you didn't stay on that topic for as long as he did. "Copyright infringement" was good but I feel like I could have made it a little meaner. Crucifixion and clergy lines were boring, I might have tried to tear up the semen lines (your bars are sterile, mine are fresh, etc etc) Second verse is similar with some alright personals and a little bit of filler.
I really wasn't feeling any strong hits either way. That being said, I feel like MadFlex had a point that Nimbus just wasn't aggressive enough. Mao wasn't exactly going ham either, but he was a bit more direct and to-the-point, even though his flow suffered a little bit. Neither came with very strong rhymes or any multies, which is a gigantic minus for both of you. Mao for the win but I think both of you were lazy as hell.
this was my first battle... but thanks for the words, I always appreciate the feedback
Nimbus was way iller.
second best battle I heard on this mess of garbage though, too bad the two best MCs had to face each other in the first round otherwise this could be the top. But only really because Nimbus destroyed it.
Best battle of the first round both MC were godly.
i really love this battle best one yet sadly only one MC can move up.
Nimbus, love your verses they had great lines great flow just it was all there. I like how you flip what Mao said in his first verse. respect you as a MC liking on what your doing and keep it up man.
Mao was all there too and i guess both MC had to come hard for each other. You had some funny nice lines "Nimbus, you're as soft as my woman's clitoris
If I tickle you right, you'll be dripping on ya pair of kicks" Lol your flow was nice too Like you as a MC too dude keep it up
Both MC really when hard in this battle and they both should go on but only one can go and i'm giving it to Nimbus for being there alittle more then Mao this was really hard to have a winner too but they had to be one or i would not be call a battle
Both MC did Great Godly geart love to hear who wins with votes
Thanks for voting singinmuffin8
Cuz of the clarity, flow, and opening.
Thanks for voting Dr.Cerebro
this is honestly close
Nimbus 1st 8 - Nimbus did "some" homework by using some track Titles from Mickeys page; however creativity on it was ehh..
Mickeys 1st 8 - I thought the shots were direct and whitty..lol alter boy
Nimbus 2nd 8 - Great counter from the remarks made in Mickeys first 8
Mickey 2nd 8 - I know Nimbus is pissed about these personal shots.
Lyrics were top notch by both, Nimbus on better delivery, Mickey on quality dissing..
Since its a battle, Im going with the quality dissing to give Mickey the advance by a cunt hair.
Keep up both!
Thanks for voting KlazikNadi
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