Alright, so this is a new RnB song that I made better then my last one. This time I did more to this one then my last R&B song. I experimented, made sure everythin' was in tune, the pitch & melody being right, added SFX, etc. I also hope you find this as relaxin' as I did.
Instruments:
2 SFX
1 Pad
7 Drums & Percussions (Clap, Hat, Snare, Snare Roll, Beat Crash, & Triangle)
3 Leads (2 Synth Leads & 1 Guitar Synth Lead)
1 Synth Flute
1 Acoustic Guitar
2-3 Synth Arps (One was edited at different times)
1 Piano
1 Strings
Anyways, in total I used a total of 20 instruments to connect into one sexy RNB song. I was surprised they all fit together into this one song. Pleez rate & pleez don't zero bomb (cuz really there's no reason & if there is, review why it deserves a zero), review on how I did with this song, download, & enjoy this song
Nice work.
Like a couple people have said, it gets a little cluttered in places, and a little anticlimactic, but for your age, this is some really great work, all the melodies work, they just pile on top of each other a little too much, y'know? But I'm fairly impressed, given your age, what program(s) do you use?
Yea, I'm really a music type kid, ya kno'?? Lookin' back at this song now, I totally kno watcha mean with the clutterin'. I use Acid Pro 7 cuz FL is a little to hard for me, but I'll get there one day. Also, I took the advice from this song and applied the advice into my new song if you wanna check my new one out. Stupid zerobombers though.
nice
pretty banging track. nothing really wrong with it, maybe a little bit better quality but other than that its pretty good
Alrighty, I get where you're goin' with that. Thanx for reviewin'
cool
sorry I'm too tired to write a worthy review, but wanna let you know that I've had this on for quite a while now and it sounds good and doesn't get boring.. keep makin'em
Thanx man. I'm glad you think it's interestin' :)
Great
I really like it and it has a great feeling/mood to it.
My one and only complaint would be that your melody was pretty much the same all the way through, you changed the instrumentation quite a lot, but the actual melody was repeated over and over. You might be surprised how much better even just one variation on your main melody can keep the song in motion all the way through.
Other than that excellent work!
Omega
I totally get where you're goin' at. I was kinda rushed to make this song a little, but yeah. My next RnB song imma make might be better. Variation seems to be my one problem, but surprisingly, some of my new songs are startin' to get completely in tune now. Thanx for the review :)
Amazing!
Definitely your own style!
Love the motion of it, everything is going on in it. Would love to see it on a MMORPG or any Japanese type game haha.
Keep it up!
Wow, thanx man. Yeah, the style is a bit different, but evolution is kickin' in with every new song. I'm actually gonna make like an asian kinda RnB soon. I will most certainly keep it up :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Stavier 
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