Great song for a girl!
Yeah, true, I remember recording this as our first song awhile back :D
This rap is really good. Keep it up! You have alot of potential!
Thanx man :D Yeah, remember, I only made the beat, but I can rap too
Thanx for the review!!!
This needs a little bit of work and it will be great. First, your vocals kinda of drown out your music, it sounds a bit prominent, maybe try and meld the vocals with the music so it sounds more seamless. You should also have a beat that supports the vocals repetition. He is operating on a faster beat then the song is allowing, so just add a bit more so it supports it, to give it a more solid feel. 02:40/02:51 was too much of a break, shorten it so it feels more natural. The longer it is the more disconnected I feel from it, so I think a shorter break will keep the feel and mood in it. Not really a rap reviewer but that was the feel I got from it, keep it up though!
For the vocal volume, I usually try to make them louder only because then people don't complain "I can't hear the vocals" or "I can't understand what he's saying." As for the beat, I agree. Maybe I could've added percussion, but I don't think I had any percussion samples at the time. For the break, the only reason it sounds like that is because there was a different break after that, but I cut it out cuz my cousin said it would've been hard to make any more lyrics since the original instrumental is 4:30. Thanx for the review!!!
A Well-Done Rap Song
Well dang! You guys created an earfull of catchy awesome. The lyrics had me smiling, and the rapping itself was pleasant. It went really well with the cool instrumental. I like this :)
Thanx man. He tried his best to make the best lyrics possible without cursing and relating to the topic of the song, a girl hypnotizing a guy cuz of love. Thanx for the review!!!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.