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Reviews for "Fruity Evening"

Ergh

You definitely think you got your own style here and its good. I think though as your song was growing throughout and more so when you would pause, but it seemed on your second pause at 3:23 you carried it to the same. It didn't evolve which I think really moves a listener to want more because the song becomes dynamic. It was still a good song but I think you can make it even better. 10/5.

Stavier responds:

Yeah, I'm tryin' to get a new style of Hip Hop & RnB. Techno & all that, imma wait to make more of that stuff now that I got new stuff. I totally know what your talkin' about when you say that pause at 3:23 & I might add somethin' there, but I may not cuz I'll save your advice for my next RnB song. I like to take your words of advice cuz you always have some kinda constructive critism. Like Just Go With It for example, you say I could've had a better brush hat & yet you rate it a 10 for the emotion of the song. Anyways, thanx for rating & reviewin'. Be on the lookout for any of my new RnB stuff.

Amazing!

Definitely your own style!

Love the motion of it, everything is going on in it. Would love to see it on a MMORPG or any Japanese type game haha.

Keep it up!

Stavier responds:

Wow, thanx man. Yeah, the style is a bit different, but evolution is kickin' in with every new song. I'm actually gonna make like an asian kinda RnB soon. I will most certainly keep it up :)

cool

sorry I'm too tired to write a worthy review, but wanna let you know that I've had this on for quite a while now and it sounds good and doesn't get boring.. keep makin'em

Stavier responds:

Thanx man. I'm glad you think it's interestin' :)

Great

I really like it and it has a great feeling/mood to it.

My one and only complaint would be that your melody was pretty much the same all the way through, you changed the instrumentation quite a lot, but the actual melody was repeated over and over. You might be surprised how much better even just one variation on your main melody can keep the song in motion all the way through.

Other than that excellent work!

Omega

Stavier responds:

I totally get where you're goin' at. I was kinda rushed to make this song a little, but yeah. My next RnB song imma make might be better. Variation seems to be my one problem, but surprisingly, some of my new songs are startin' to get completely in tune now. Thanx for the review :)

nice

pretty banging track. nothing really wrong with it, maybe a little bit better quality but other than that its pretty good

Stavier responds:

Alrighty, I get where you're goin' with that. Thanx for reviewin'