Ergh
You definitely think you got your own style here and its good. I think though as your song was growing throughout and more so when you would pause, but it seemed on your second pause at 3:23 you carried it to the same. It didn't evolve which I think really moves a listener to want more because the song becomes dynamic. It was still a good song but I think you can make it even better. 10/5.
Yeah, I'm tryin' to get a new style of Hip Hop & RnB. Techno & all that, imma wait to make more of that stuff now that I got new stuff. I totally know what your talkin' about when you say that pause at 3:23 & I might add somethin' there, but I may not cuz I'll save your advice for my next RnB song. I like to take your words of advice cuz you always have some kinda constructive critism. Like Just Go With It for example, you say I could've had a better brush hat & yet you rate it a 10 for the emotion of the song. Anyways, thanx for rating & reviewin'. Be on the lookout for any of my new RnB stuff.