Well Built
I found the whole song good, but i especially liked how you built it up, almost like a story was slowly unfolding, and then the action began around 1:18ish. Then around 1:30ish the conflict begins. Then, the lowest ponit ahs been reached around 2:00... just at the end it seems as if it is about to come back, and strong but sadly this is incomplete... Very well done though. I look forward to the full version. Would do well as a lengthly opener to something like a film. 5/5/fave