REALLY though...
Ever so slightly funny enough for a pfft. Still poorly made and the story poorly modified. This isn't worth a rating of mature.
I still don't like this. It needs to be blammed.
Author Comments
yo this is my (somewhat) improved version of lord of the kings!
have fun watching!
review and vote plz
It's a very short movie, and it's only my second, so go easy on me okay?
and please REVIEW!!!
so i can improve my skills!
don't just rate!
REEEEVIEEEWWW!!!!!
rawr.
LOL
Nice work demus,i dont expect much diffrent from ya when i see you in class =P
Lol
Not bad, could be greatly improved, but for a second flash it's pretty good. Now for some advice:
1.) Learn flash better, I can see that you didn't really use layers (or so it seemed)
If you take some time to watch some tutorials or read up on some of the functionality of the program you will be greatly rewarded. :)
2.) Keep the file size small. Don't import full songs, just clips, it keeps the file smaller.
3.)Writing skills and timing. Gotta learn to be creative in a way that everyone will like, and time everything (like the text transitions) so people can read them and understand them.
But overall, not bad man, keep it up!
P.S.
you got an extra star for using my music. ;)
demus1 responds:
hey thanx for the advice :D
lol
You have fire fart?
Epic, man. Truly epic.
demus1 responds:
hahaha thanks XP
Needs a different script
I didn't give you a '0' because I see that you did make an effort in doing this movie, but I want to point out that the writing needs to be changed. It is not good at all, but since I don't want you to feel like I am trying to get you to stop trying, I thought the animation itself wasn't too bad.
demus1 responds:
thanks for giving me some helpful advice on this one :)
and i did rush the script a bit i know,
but overall i didn't do it that terrible right?
