Wow!
The melody and the lyrics are amazing!
I recorded this in one go - you can see the video of it on youtube :)
www.youtube.com/watch?v=D I9BTyYjp8s
(remember to delete the space between that newgrounds puts in the link above)
Lyrics:
I look but can't see
What choice is to be
I try but I can't see so far
It's just too hard
I wander alone
So blinded by home
I speak to the moon and the stars
Saying it's just too hard.
I want my life back
I want my life back
I want my life how it used to be
Completely free.
I sing of the light
So shiny and bright
But now I can't see int he dark
It's just too hard
I look to the skies
I need no more lies
All I want is straight from the heart
Is that just too hard?
I want my life back
I want my life back
I want my life how it used to be
To be
To be...
I want my life back
I want my life back
I want my life how it used to be
To be
To be...
Enjoy!
-hania
xox
Wow!
The melody and the lyrics are amazing!
Overall pretty good
Make no mistake, as in all of your songs, the beauty of your voice and instrumentation culminates into something special here. This almost sounds like you were just experimenting with something, however, given its relatively incomplete sound. While beautiful, this song doesn't seem to go anywhere for a long time until the end, and the vocals are hardly distinguishable from the rest of the music. It's also very slow, and that's fine, but that means it's not a song I can easily listen to. Your voice is very strong and capable when you pick up the tempo.
Beautiful, but not up to par with your usual stuff.
7/10
B+ class
3/5
Amazing, as always
Your voice is absolutely beautiful, and the music, relate-able. Honestly, this song basically spells out exactly how I've felt for the past year or so.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful song.
I enjoyed it.
Although, it strongly reminds me of my love life. *derp*
All the reason for me to enjoy it even more!
zOMG
i want you to enter american idol now!!
VVV
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.