Reviews for _-={Wrath of a Broken Soul}=-_

[Blood-Raven651]

I have once again a story :D!

In the Ancient ruins of the once fabled Sliver Knights with gargantuan statutes of dead heros walks a man. A man with his head hung low and walking with a small stride. As he reaches the middle of the ruins he feels its power surging through his body feeling young once again. Going through the hallways with every step bring back gruesome but pleasing memories. He reached the object he has been looking for ever since that day. He gazed at it with great anticipation waiting for that power he once held many hundreds of years ago. The ancient man slowly stuck his arm forward, and grabbed the artifact. The rush of power went surging through his veins making him young once again. At the kingdom of Gershum a decaying king looks out his castle window in his royal quarters. He sees the beacon of red energy for the spot he remembers so well. "NO this can not be! i killed him hundreds of years ago!" The ordered his most trusted knight
to get him his old armor. The knight returned with the shining armor that was so brilliant that even the king was stunned by it. Once had gotten his armored boots on he felt his legs turn young again. After he had gotten all his armor equipped he said to himself "I had hoped that i would never have to do this again..." The king once again looked outside his window. He was horrified, he saw rivers of blood from his loyal subjects and he spotted the his very own brother in the armor he was in on the faithful day. A tear slid down the kings cheek. He ran down into his mighty hall see the doors on the entrance blown away by his brother. The king slowly walked towards the genocidal maniac "So you came back from the dead brother?" he said in a furious tone" Nye i was only waiting." as he said will walking towards the king. "For what?" and in an instant the kings brother was in front of him. The king looking at his face was shadowed but he could still see the fain red glow in his eyes. " For this" and he slid his demonic sword into the kings gut piercing his body. He pulled his sword out and watched the king fall to the ground, and with a murderous smile on his face he let out a demonic laugh. Well what do you think :D?

MaestroRage responds:

Everything about this story just clicked one scene after another :D! I could see the frantic movement, the approaching darkness at the beginning, and then the brother rushes in, gives his awesome speech, and then the second the blade impales him, the choirs come in. Slow motion death, reaching for stability, falling to knees, and then to his side, the king dies.

Murderous laugh scene cut! Ending cue entrance.

Like a movie :)

thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

[bucky-the-squirrel]

hmm...

I can definitely see your story of vengeance, but to me it more symbolises a battle. The commanders are brothers, then in the fight there is a clearing and they see this. The two fight, and end up killing each other in a stalemate, as well as their armies. WOOOOOO! Narrator wins with checkmate!!!

MaestroRage responds:

A valid story, and an entertaining one. It is often most moving when two people who once shared great bonds raise their arms to try and destroy the other. Brothers they are, and brothers they will always be, but on this day, family they were not.

Stalemate, so many of my battles go down that road. Either they don't kill each other, or they both die in a large blaze of glory. Of course win or lose, narrator will always win >:)

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

[fillup0]

Another story

A man has been captured, his family are famous warriors. he is tortured for months. The begining part is him trying to struggle as he is bought closer to the torture rack. When the last drum blast comes in before, that is the finla strap being tied to his leg... As the music gets calm, behind doors you can hear the screaming of that man. As 01:12 kicks in, family members blast through the door. As their henchmen take everyone hostage, the mans borther is standing there, shining armour and cape blowing in the wind as the light blinds him and everyone in the room. The man has no clue who it is. Until he gets closer. He takes him off the rack and carries him to the chariot. 01:42 sees the sunset going in as the chariot rides off as millions of others ride off with henchmen.

Simple story which matches the savage nature of the intruments.

This piece is incredible!

MaestroRage responds:

a torture scene! Hmm, a very impressive thought indeed, I did not even fathom such a possibility! Living this story for myself, was quite an experience, thank you for sharing that, and it fits very very well.

I like the shining armour and cape blowing in the wind segment. Classic, but proven to work!

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

[Chemic120]

Cool

Im so putting this in my Oblivion battle music folder.

MaestroRage responds:

Oblivion, good game. Good game indeed :D.

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

[SavageFurryBeast]

Blown away

That's what i am: blown away. I created account on NG just to express my delight on your submissions. Your music eventually triggered me to start doing my own art. And I'm truly thankful for that.

MaestroRage responds:

I am glad you found inspiration in these pieces Savage! I hope that your own artwork flourishes into something of great power and beauty!

Thank you for your review, I am glad you liked the piece!