Greatest Betrayal
Very good song, it brought to mind something I was planning on making into a game. This song would be great for the tragic and dramatic twist. Though to get the point across I would need a lot of space unfortunately. In short though:
A warrior is betrayed by a woman he falls in love with, she had used him for a purpose and had what she wanted. Unable to fight her, his heart too weak, she kills him, stabbing him through the heart. He falls over, drawing his last breath. She cries slightly, realising what she had done. She had used him, for her masters ill intents. She left after shedding only a few tears. After she left, he coughed, taking in a shallow breath. He was an immortal, and now, knew what he must do. He stands slowly, looking over the graveyard of his kind. He must make things right he said. The sunsets slowly, the warrior watching it set before leaving...
Again, great music, very dramatic I say. Keep up the great work, hope to hear more.
10/10 and 5/5