Honestly, I went into this hoping it was going to be a little reminiscent of Zelda
and I know it's your first game, but there's several things wrong with it
1. The character movement is jaged and hard to control
2. three words. High Kill Distance. I don't have to be anywhere near one of the daggers, and my screen freezes up, and I figure out that it's because I died due to the inaccuracy of the kill zone that surrounds each dagger.
3. The spawn rate of daggers is tto consitent, and there's no way except avoiding your inevitible death is to hope and pray your dodging the invisible kill radius, no matter how much skill anyone has, they won't be able to avoid them for long which makes the game kinda impossible
(Note: I was too frustrated to attempt Jake's story)
Other than that, it was okay, I like the simplicity, but the aggervation isn't worth the time.
remember, if any improvements are to be done, it's on the daggers, fix the rate of how they fall, make the kill space around each dagger a bit more accurate, and make it a bit more possible to avoid Death
and if you can, spiff up the character movement, the graphics arn't that bad for your first time,
and with that, I wish you good luck.