Reviews for Owl (Book One)

[wIsEgOat]

Excellent work ( whens part II come out???)

ITs only too bad you put this story up on newgrounds where it wont be apreciated as much as it should. I think you should go into childrens book writting and make quite a bit of cash. The story was really well thought out and i found myself really captivated by it and was annoyed when the story didnt finnish and i had to wait for part II! Seriously go and publish a book like this it appeals to all ages (more so kids but adults can still get into it i recon) it'll sell for sure.
keep up the good work

Virgilcomic responds:

Hey, thanks. I'm currently looking into publishing, so wish me luck! And I'm not promising when part II will come out, but I've got the story written, and hopefully I will get it out sometime in October.
-Oz

[punkrocksknot]

haha

nice! It's really original. People don't usually make books on NG they make movies. BUt it was still good. Tho I wasn't up to reading the book the picutres looked awesome.

[schala]

Very nice

The writing is excellent, although you could do to proofread a bit more to catch typos. ^_^ The page numbers were also a bit too small. But very nice overall, despite its length.

[l-croft]

This is excellent!

I love this! This is one of those things which you don't see every day! I love the whole layout and the ilustrations. Those are what makes this so good! The sparsely animated objects do help, although they are too far in between each other. Also you could add more interactivity and maybe some clickable Flash objects and are animated. Also helpful would be some sound and/or music. This is one of the better Flash pieces I've seen on Newgrounds, and it would be a shame if this got blammed to its grave, or removed for some other reason.
This is the best non-violent Flash on Newgrounds!
l_croft signing out
-peace:P

Virgilcomic responds:

I really appreciate your review, I-croft. I wanted to comment on the reason I didn't want to do too many animations. I thought originally of doing a cartoon, but the story got too big, so I decided to do it as a storybook. But when I made the storybook, I didn't want it to be tacky. And I thought I'd rather err on the side of too little music and sound and animation, and make the user use their imagination, than put too much into this flash and make it tacky. I'm a much better illustrator than animator, and I'm pretty sure that's what would have happened. :-p . See ya, I-croft.
-Oz

[Samcwic]

A pleasing fairytale.

I hardly expected to find something like this at Newgrounds or any other flash site, for that matter. The story is humorous and touching. It would make a fine children's book. The writing is rough here and there, but good overall. I'm definitely going to read the other installments.