screw that last reviewer
Screw that last reviewer. This story reminded me a lot of The Finding Stone: A Modern Day Parable by Kristin Lore Webber. If you haven't read that book already, you should see if you can find a copy of it online. I know that she has it posted up on her website. This story reminded me a lot of the concept behind The Finding Stone.
-- Kitty
definetly something different
and the graphics were really nice - but i couldnt sit and read thru the entire thing. its better off being in a book for kids. =)
Thanks.
-Oz
Beautiful.
You just don't see this type of thing on NG. It's great, just great. It starts to degrade towards the end though: You keep repeating yourself if you know what I mean.
Where did you get your story from? Did you write it yourself or is someone else doing it for you? Did you have any kind of inspiration?
I can't wait for the sequel. Whatever will happen to poor little Owl?
I wrote the story myself, and Adam Tierney helped me start it all off. He wrote most of the Sun and Moon part. As for inspiration, I would mostly list my life, but also a great many number of books, too numerous to mention.
great story
this is great. it makes a really good story and its nice and long. it leaves you hanging like all good storys :/. and its really good in a story sort of way. the text is a bit small tho but thats about all. just pickiness from me. well cant wait til part 2 :)
Excellent work ( whens part II come out???)
ITs only too bad you put this story up on newgrounds where it wont be apreciated as much as it should. I think you should go into childrens book writting and make quite a bit of cash. The story was really well thought out and i found myself really captivated by it and was annoyed when the story didnt finnish and i had to wait for part II! Seriously go and publish a book like this it appeals to all ages (more so kids but adults can still get into it i recon) it'll sell for sure.
keep up the good work
Hey, thanks. I'm currently looking into publishing, so wish me luck! And I'm not promising when part II will come out, but I've got the story written, and hopefully I will get it out sometime in October.
-Oz