well givin it's length and small page #'s
it wuz pretty good. oh yea next time u do one of these catch alll thos typos :)
Reviews for "Owl (Book One)"
Virgilcomic responds:
Typos? Where? Where? Grammar had never been my thing, so I wouldn't doubt if there were more than a few run-on sentences and incorrect placements of commas, but typos? I'll have another run over of it. And feel free to email me. :-p
-Oz
I like pictures.......
But reading ain't my thing.....
right, this is not my type of thing
i can see u r really into this kinda stuff, but its not my kind of thing, but this took u a long time, and wud b nice to sumone of a diff taste, so i gave it a 2, and my review 5. very diplomatic
Virgilcomic responds:
Wow. A voter who works like the government! :-O Just kidding. Thanks for cutting me some slack!
Umm.......
Could you make a version where it reads it to you? Im pretty lazy and that seemed like alot of reading for me.
Virgilcomic responds:
I considered this, but opted out of it for several reasons, mostly because I believe the book format works better. I also have a voice kind of like Elvis, and I didn't think that would fit the story.
ok dude
great story! way WAY too long though. make it read by someone and more like a movie that just pages. thats just me. great job though. i gave it a low rating only because its super long and probably longer than the attention span of most NGers. lol. o well. great job dude.
Virgilcomic responds:
You're probably right about the attention span thing, kryptik. It's an unfortunate fact. :\
-Oz