Reviews for Out of Order 1

[SinJackle]

And here I was afraid not a single good animation was coming out today! Amazing!
The personal choice of art was amazingly well done! Congrats! The backgrounds, character design, animation was great!
The story telling, well... I didn't actually get what's going on in the whole movie... An apocalyptic world where outlaws in Charlie Chaplin outfit are everywhere collecting the loot of a dying airship.
The narrator at the beginning lacked the ability to put the emotion needed for what the supposedly main character was about to do (commit suicide), and it felt more like Michael Jai White trying to tell a story to his newborn son...

Other than that, it was amazing! You get a 5, because it deserves the spotlight, but a 3.5 on the review, because of what I truly think about the movie.

Good work, and waiting for the next one ;)

kmau responds:

I wish I could've stretched it a little bit more to allow the story to breathe. On the other hand that's some unsanswered questions for later episodes.
The narration in the beginning was supposed to capture the characters' developed apathy for his own situation he has been in for so long, hence the thought of dying is actually a relief. I'm sure it would be hard for any voice actor to catch this emotion without - well, showing emotions.

Thank you for your helpful review and I'm glad you liked it overall!

[MichaelJ]

The animation is AMAZING!
The music is okay; the sound effects are a bit lacking.
The script is a train wreck, and the voice actors are the passengers.

kmau responds:

Elaborating would help. :)

[SoulRemnant]

Very good animation, well done good sir! i am curious to see where this goes... The audio on the other hand. It was to quiet to hear anywhere but a quiet room. You might want to up the volume, people can always lower the volume. Quality is great though. There is not much to keep me interested. There isn't really a story line. If you want people to pay attention, you would have to come up with something really intriguing to keep them interested. Good luck =)

kmau responds:

People can also always up the volume. :) But I know what you mean, I plan to raise the overall volume of the next one.

[Endurezpowerofply]

Wow! Great idea :D

[krochoa]

I thought that the animation was on point, though the voices were a lil bit low quality. It moved a little bit slow but over all i liked it. I hope to see more work from you.

Thanks for your time,
K.O