This is great!! I think you are doing a good job, however the male voices need to be clearer. By the way I think this could be the intro for a game, it is promising.
Reviews for "Out of Order 1"
FANTASTIC!
Amazing. The sound took away from it a bit, but overall it was better than the stuff most people post on here. I would be pleased to see more from you Mr. Rustler. If you wouldn't mind, could you teach us your animation style for motion graphing? Everything seemed to flow together, instead of being cut from camera to camera, something hard to do in animation and nearly impossible in flash. I like that, that sweeping instead of cutting, and am refreshed to see another great animator here on NG. Here's to more works from you. Good luck~
The art and style is lovely, the animation is decent although lacking a few frames in some places.
Only issue was the audio and voice acting was all over the place, what was the deal with that?
I'm surely staying tuned for this :D