Wow. Impressive.
I shall say this is really good and breath-taking piece of artwork. The story got a nice pace of events, background and all. I was very happy that you showed in the extras your references, so i could read'em.
It's a true masterpiece, and as said before, 10/10 isn't enough. I'm glad that you keep the non-fancy font to read the history, that was very better than when you started, the graphic changes were all for the best. Hope you get more fans and followers here in NG and over the net. Your work is very good, since cooljaws i read'em and get impressed and wonder, "why other stories aren't this good? Why so much cliché..." You know how to impress, and got an awesome criative mind.
Wokgran X
(sorry for any eng errors)