I like it, but...
I have always liked these story maker type things although when I did the drunken antics thing I have noticed some broken English (e.g. "Sarge found themselves on the floor...")
Reviews for "4 IN 1: Story Generator"
Little-Rena responds:
Needed a his/her option for that to fix it I think.
Next week we'll know who's WHO then.
One day, Bitchslap Dan got lost en route to QC and had to stop and ask directions from a strangely cold man. 'Ah,' he said, before pointing east, and listing his instructions.
'You take a left after' 7 yards, go past the monster - be careful it's a bit dark on the corner after that - and then you're going to want to continue for 10 feet until you come across the werewolf sanctuary. Be careful there, they tend to get pretty eerie at this time of night.
With that, Bitchslap Dan tipped Bloody hat to the kind stranger and continued on his way in his bad-ass truck. As he passed out of sight, the stranger chuckled fearsome and cast aside his disguise, and revealed that he was in fact Tom Fulp! What dire fate lays in store for you? Tune in next week to find out!
Good generator game.
Little-Rena responds:
Thankyou :)
lol
Jim had just finished his semester at The los angles University. Jim was ready for the winter and had plans to fly to heaven and stay for 666 weeks to walk. Sadly Jim was tricked and ended up in hell where the evil bird had been trying to take over the villages of the happy troll. Jim met joe and they walk together.
They were very sexy when they found the fuckable dildo that would destroy the bird once and for all. When they won the couple celebrated with monkey brains until 11:30. When suddenly a cool earthquake started to destroy hell so the planes engines were masturbating and they were off to a stoned vacation in heaven.
Little-Rena responds:
Glad you liked it ;)
Space Poem
My Story:
One day, John got lost en route to International Space Station and had to stop and ask directions from a strangely Beautyfull man. 'Ah,' he said, before pointing Earth Orbit, and listing his instructions.
'You take a left after' 33 yards, go past the Sky - be careful it's a bit quiet on the corner after that - and then you're going to want to continue for Far Away until you come across the Space Cow sanctuary. Be careful there, they tend to get pretty Starry at this time of night.
With that, John tipped Helmet to the kind stranger and continued on his way in his Space Shuttle. As he passed out of sight, the stranger chuckled Playfull and cast aside his disguise, and revleaed that he was in fact Peter! What dire fate lays in store for you? Tune in next week to find out!
Little-Rena responds:
lol
Look like a real story
Lol, look like a real one : I put it with my comments :
Zangara found themselves on the floor outside of Zangara's Castle feeling very dizzy and sick but not knowing why. Zangara decided to go back inside but was turned away by the smart bouncer at the door. (Yeah, it's my castle, so I hope I got a smart one !) Zangara wanted to get to the bottom of what had happend and asked 'What should I do ?' to which the bouncer, Marcus replied 'Got to synthonize bro' (I don't know what's english for what Neo do in Matrix, I put "synthonize" as a verb) with a look of creepy (Ok, no i'm really afraid)
By this point, Zangara had given up trying to get back inside and decided to walk home (that was already my home but anyway !) but tripped on a lovely strange globe which was just lying in the middle of the road. Zangara who wasn't feeling too smart decided to rub the object (nice one !) which teleported them to Zangara's Castle, which was filled with many people, all looking very easy, Zangara wanted to talk to them but soon passed out and found themseleves waking up in Bayona (a city in France where I go on holyday.. lol) what had happend? Zangara didn't want to think about it anymore and decided to forget by walking (that really should make me forget about this. Really ? Oh ok, I should walk more... xD)
End?
9/10 :
-more drawing/graphics to illustrate the story should be appreciated
-more stories !
Little-Rena responds:
Yeah, I can't draw though so I need to get someone to draw them and more stories? Yeah, probably a good idea, lol.
Thanks.