Reviews for Super Zombie World Part 1

[DemiseAnimation]

Good, but needs improvement.

Good (and probably to the best of your abilities) but there are still some improvements.

1. Add subtitles
2. All the white boxes on walls and such, should be transparent. It would make it look much better
3. All your text isnt that great to be honest, im sure you were trying to get a zombie effect (??) but you can get much better texts at several different fonts.
http://www.dafont.com/
4. It froze on the part with the board talking to the goomba, check that out for me
5. Scene select? If you cant figure out the freezing thing this would be very helpful.

Probably some more I could pick out if it didnt freeze ;), im sure this would have a much larger score if you did the improvements listed.

MurderMysteryMan responds:

I'll probably add subtitles next time. Freezing? That's terrible! I'm not sure why it would happen; it didn't happen to me. I'll consider scene select. Thank you :)

[mixmaster1000]

What the heck

This is just opening credits. Dude where's the action and the shooting and the luigi wetting himself. This I must say is sort of a waste of time without the action. Please man make the action part or else this will just fall trough.
~mixmaster1000~
Out

MurderMysteryMan responds:

There is some action, but most of it didn't make it into the first part. Thanks :)

[beepbop]

hmmm

not bad voice acting wasn't great and sometimes you couldn't hear what they were saying however it made up for it with the storyline and characters however daisy should've also been there

MurderMysteryMan responds:

lol, Poor daisy, too bad she died :P
thanks :)

[Ericho]

This was good

I liked how there were so many voice actors in this because it made sure that everybody had a pretty distinctive voice. The sprite animation with the zombies was well done too. I guess it is pretty weird to see the Mario characters use guns. It seems like there could have been more action, but it did try to get a plot started. It is really cool to see Bowser and Ludwig Van Koopa fighting on the same side. The sprites just look so colorful, and I loved the references to "Super Mario Galaxy 2", a truly fantastic game.

MurderMysteryMan responds:

Thank you. :) Glad you appreciate the reference as well.

[madness570]

Nice

it was a cool animation i didn't mind it the intro to me music choice wasnt to good on my opinion but who cares im not making the flash. Anways it's a nice concept but you should try to get the sprites hold they're guns and not just have them attached to they're arm? lol yeah nice job and good luck with your flash animating

MurderMysteryMan responds:

Thank you :)