Reviews for Super Zombie World Part 1

[DemiseAnimation]

Good, but needs improvement.

Good (and probably to the best of your abilities) but there are still some improvements.

1. Add subtitles
2. All the white boxes on walls and such, should be transparent. It would make it look much better
3. All your text isnt that great to be honest, im sure you were trying to get a zombie effect (??) but you can get much better texts at several different fonts.
http://www.dafont.com/
4. It froze on the part with the board talking to the goomba, check that out for me
5. Scene select? If you cant figure out the freezing thing this would be very helpful.

Probably some more I could pick out if it didnt freeze ;), im sure this would have a much larger score if you did the improvements listed.

MurderMysteryMan responds:

I'll probably add subtitles next time. Freezing? That's terrible! I'm not sure why it would happen; it didn't happen to me. I'll consider scene select. Thank you :)

[darian575]

Hmmph.

The animation isn't all that great, the dialouge is somewhat underwhelming, and the voice acting is...uh...not great. But for some reason I like it. I don't know, maybe it's the fact that everyone's thought of this once but never really tried to make it, or maybe it's the B-movie feel to it. I dunno, I just like it. Can flash have charisma? I guess so. Well, thanks for making this so I could insult/compliment it. :)

MurderMysteryMan responds:

You like the B-movie? Well I hope you'll still be on my side with movies when better ones come out :)

[ryphos]

Not bad

Not bad at all! You did a very good job creating this, even though it is a mario sprite flash. I would recommend using subtitles, as some of the characters are hard to understand. The story is sort of cliche, but I like it. This has great potential to be another great newgrounds series! Like I said before Subtitles would be a great addition and the billboard is a great character, as well as gary, something about them made me laugh. Good job and I hope the second one is even better. 8/10 4/5

MurderMysteryMan responds:

Thank you for appreciating the characters :)

[RedBaron1440]

kkkkk

Well i have seen zombies and mario and sum of both. This is alright butit does go a lil slow. Also with me being a gamer i hear the nazi zombie SFX so tht does bring up harmful memories but makes it better for me. also bulletbills and twomphs are either stone or metal so idk how a bite will infect them but it makes it more of a challenge for the crew. I am looking forward for the next one and the billboard dude cant he stand watch (hes wood...), maybe some more violence idk. Good job!

MurderMysteryMan responds:

Harmful memories? How could Nazi Zombies be harmful?
Thanks :)

[Almores]

Well

It was a good movie, a good plot idea that I enjoyed. The only thing I really had a problem with was:

Voice: Those voice actors arent that great, honestly. I dont want to say they're bad, they just dont fit the characters they are voicing.

MurderMysteryMan responds:

Okay, thanks :)