Lacked funny
I dunno if it was intended to be a comedy or what, but I got the sense it was. Since it wasn't actually funny, that just ruined everything for me. Work on your timing and delivery.
Lacked funny
I dunno if it was intended to be a comedy or what, but I got the sense it was. Since it wasn't actually funny, that just ruined everything for me. Work on your timing and delivery.
FAIL.
uh if your trying to make a story make a background. and if you intend to be funny.. be funny.
now continue, as a trail and error, and make your work greater! ;)
HUUUUUUUUHHH
I get that u tried hard....... well I think u tried I cant really tell I know u were tryin gto be funny but really u just embaristed ur self
nah
animation was pretty good but there was no comic timing and for that matter no comedy
good for a first entry though i guess
did u always rate "good" as 1?