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Reviews for "U: Submission Day"

Lacking of story line...

It was a very unnecessary intro in the creative building and it was hard to figure who were the main characters until the 2nd scene, whom I still do not know the names of.
If you need to look at the credits for the names of the characters, it usually means that they had no real impact on the story or you did not mention their names in the first place.
Only names I heard and remembered were: The Janitor, Geena, and King.

I would comment on the story, but there was no real story or plot. The only thing that is saving this is that it's p1. The problem with this is that you must hook the viewer to watch the next parts in which I am sorry you have failed.

Your jokes were not that funny except for the past relationship between Geena and King but it was immediately ruined by "achievement unlocked" gag. It would had been fine if there were instances of video games in the story but all you had was an art class assignment.

At times the sound effects seem to be louder than the voices. There was no medium to any sound to this flash.

All that aside you have great promise for being an animator. Definitely room for improvement but a lot better than what I seen on this website.
Just work on your story more and the right jokes will come. I'll be there for the p2.

oh.. my.. god

Every joke was so lame it just made me wonder if you were trying to make it bad (my apologies if you were). ill admit the animation and sound was decent but my god the script was just horrible. Imo content matters more then appearance. Please discontinue this.

AWFUL

the animation was okay but the story and the script was not good at all i mean dude that really sucked

disappointed...

this is the first episode and it didn't really explain much about what you are going to do with the "series". I've honestly got no clue what this is supposed to be about...

What?

The first episode of the series and you would think that the story would be explained more. Lets face it, the script and story of it was awful and I didn't understand what the video is suppose to be about. The animation was allright, but the story was just awful. If you make another one, explain whats happening and what the thing is suppose to be about. 3/10 and 1/5