Reviews for U: Submission Day

[RetardedSpiceBar]

Could be so much better...

The artwork and animation is good. It's a style I'm not particularly fond of, but it's still good. The audio is mediocre. The voice acting is pretty bad, and combined with the terrible dialogue, an autistic symphony of fail is produced every time a character opens his mouth. The jokes are all very bland. I didn't laugh once. I didn't even crack a smile. I'm not a hardass when it comes to reviewing either, but when I watch something that's been placed on the front page, I expect it to be much better than this. Work on writing and voice acting, and this will be much more enjoyable. Also, work on spelling. The subtitles looked like they were written by an 8 year old. Sorry if this seems mean, I guess it kind of is, but I'm tired of stuff like this being put on the front page. With improvements in audio/writing, this could be awesome. Until then it's just another sub-par comedy series on ye olde Newgrounds.

[thehint]

I don't know

why.........This is so..........damm, I'm trying, really trying to think up constructive criticism and not be a total dick but man this was not good. Just........do better next time............go steal some good ideas or anything that will make this better.......We don't care, just try not to waste are time.

Blakant responds:

Well, I'm trying to deliver a new kind of humor here. Still experimenting with type of joke that can actually fit for ALL ages. If u're juz looking for the kind of joke that is juz gore and bloody, and dirty, then maybe u should look into some cheap porn animation. And I'm not interested into that, becuz those type of stuff won't get us far.. And thats a fact, buddy.

[liam]

Oh boy.

This looks to me like something that a group of friends might have made, out of inside jokes about your experiences together at school (college, university, etc). The result is really quite cringe-worthy, it's not funny to an outside observer at all and it's not helped by the terrible delivery. The voice acting was ok for some characters but the vast majority were quite awful, obviously inexperienced or completely out of practice. If you're doing something like this, the voice acting is a very important part of presenting your ideas & jokes to the audience, and if that goes wrong it can be disastrous. The subtitles were also off putting because they were very wrong, bad grammar and just missing lots of words from the spoken dialogue.

The art was actually quite good and the animation also definitely better than most, I can't complain about that - could be better, but that goes for any art or animation piece ever, so you don't have much to fear there. I gave this review a 3 because the art was the only thing not awful.

[Longknife]

Lacked funny

I dunno if it was intended to be a comedy or what, but I got the sense it was. Since it wasn't actually funny, that just ruined everything for me. Work on your timing and delivery.

[mikedeezy1991]

nope not hittin any funny bones

i didnt find it very funny and the art work isnt that origanal.