5/10
The animation was good, and also the only reason you got into top 5. Besides that, you lacked a story, much less any character development. I had no clue who anyone was, or much less what was even going on. Before you go leaping into something I'll give you small advice of making a script you feel comfortable with, maybe even have a peer review about it before releasing something.
okay thanks. I did had few feedback from some of ppl I met based on the script, fix here n there. But still, not managed to impressed every1. Sry for that, and we're trying to work on the E1P2 atm. And we'll do our best. =]
Crap.
DaemonDraxx: "I feel like ramming my head into a wall to forget what I just watched. So, how did this make front page?"
Welcome to newgrounds buddy, tons of crap gets front page all the time.
GO CRAZY NEXT TIME!!!
no comment :D
ill give and eh and NOOOOO!!!! i drop my waffles....
Ugh
This is really terrible. I dunno how you got so much talent behind it.
Sorry, this was just awkward as hell to watch, I like some of the characters,
but as others have said they have very little back story and really this whole
thing seemed like a scattered mess of random dumb jokes. Some of the jokes made me chuckle,
but most of them seemed kind of stupid and out of context, especially when that one guy tried to kill himself, I mean what the fuck was that about? is he emotionally disturbed or something?
again, back story is important. The animation was decent, not my cup of tea, but It was good.
Overall, it was mediocre.