Honest Review
That was a great start of a cartoon! Very original . I can say so many great things and how much potential this really has.
The art style was unique -
The animation was a little choppy at times but that can be fixed
The frame by frame was great
The only problem I have with this was the humor. The Sudoku joke was funny, but I just don't think it fit this story. I think this should be a story with witty catch phrases , not all about jokes - because frankly this has a great storyline and I would like to know what happens next without it goofing off too much and wasting an entire episode on something that no one wants to hear.
Otherwise great job, cannot wait until episode 2!