I'm wondering...
Wondering why you've uploaded the same thing twice? I really liked the animation, but I had to give you a lower score this time, because I've already seen this exact same animation. Last time you got a 4, this time you get a 3. I kept watching when I realized it was the same, thinking maybe you had added on to the end, but no, just disappointment awaited me.
The last file I uploaded had to be deleted until I could fix the issues I had with it. There is a little more added to this submission such as title screens and controls...
Could use some work
I don't want to sound like an ass and all, but I have a few things to say about this flash. Note that this is my opinion.
1. The voice acting and quality was bad. It could use some adjustments and some characteristics.
2. The story was boring me to tears. It's nothing new but the same old stories/movies/videos I see and watch everyday.
3. I know everyone likes anime nowadays but you should try making your own style. I'm not saying make it look like crap but at to where alot of people would like it. Anime is getting a little overated and cliche now. I too am trying to change that habit.
4. The animation was decent. I'd rather you to try a little better since it looked a little miss-shaped at the character's face.
That would be my constructive criticism. Like I said before, I didn't meant to be an ass or anything like that. Just giving you a few minor suggestions. I hope to see more of your work.
wayyyyy to long
its was such a good idea, but you took way to long to execute it. The entire video was boring until the part where the door broke down. I would recommend looking over your storyboard and see if any of it seems just the slightest bit boring, because when it comes to flash movies, you have to keep people on their toes.
Bad quality, story so-so
It may turn out nice, but so far quality, and a bit boring story make me vote 5/10. Its just nothing new or exciting.
okay
not the best quality wise but very good story