um, kewl..?
was good for the animation, idea and mood established. -tives for making some sense, but not enough of and not developing plot line.
Reviews for "Across the Universe: Ep.1"
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Overall, pretty good.
Sound quality wasn't great, and plot so far looks like something you'd find in any generic anime.
The combined effects worked really well. I just really hope you work on the storyline - I'd encourage you NOT to use anime influences as they can be the most boring, repetitive, and nonsensical toons around.
Interesting.
Good story, and fantastic use of suspense. I really like where this story is going. However, I must say that I dislike your animating style. Your animation itself is pretty fluid and decent enough when it comes to non-characters, and the opening scene in particular is incredible.
What I find difficult to handle, though, is that your characters are "cartoon" while most everything else is "real." If this was something light on story, such as a stick figure battle or the like, then it would be negligible, but not with an animation like this. When you're developing characters, trying to make them seem like actual people, it is very important to make them seem as lifelike as they can be. It needs to be as easy as possible to relate to the characters, and that means having them look, talk, act, and move realistically. Your characters, unfortunately, constantly remind me that I'm watching a cartoon. In the sequel, I strongly suggest that you make more detailed and fluid characters. Such devotion to everything else is amazing; just apply youself as much to your characters.
it was OK
the sounds were good, the music was good, the only thing i have to complain about was the animation. it was realy choppy all in all good job and we all hope to see more of you
Pretty Good
I loved the music of it. The story its self was pretty good to. The lightning bolts were wicked. I admit the animation could be worked on around the edges some, but other than that it was great.