ehhh
When you try to shoot for too epic, it'll come back and bite you, in this case it did and it also ate your leg and kicked you in the balls while at it. Seriously though, the storyline was shoddily executed (I can't say that the actual storyline was shoddy due to the fact i didn't understand it due to the shoddy execution :D) and there were way too many slow pans still shots.
Onto the stuff that was good, animation was damn awesome and you can tell alot of effort was put into this, so kudos on that. I agree this is one of the best Madness Day 2008 entries and you may indeed take a place. So I wish you luck, (although you wont need it with the unlimited supply of skill you have :P, well except for explaining story...)