Nice
Can tell you put serious effort into this as it is a very good piece of work. The only thing I would say couldve been better was the pace couldve been quicker, or more frantic. But that in itself does not take away from this flash. Kick ass job. Did Madness proud.
Thanks for the reply buddy, ;)
the animation was good, but..
i think that the storyline was a bit confusing.. how did the scared guy get out of prison with the help of that girl? couldn't he have used his powers in his own? i didn't get the whole tortured person thing, and then the germans came out of nowhere.. and then the girl fell, and then the germans ran away and then the girl got ressurected.. like.. i don't get any of this.. the storyline is too confusing.. i think that you think the storyline is pretty clear because you know it better, but for us is really hard.. oh.. about the fights..they were a bit too short for my taste.. i dunno.. they were too repetitive.. like in every fight there is one dude who manages to only punch the protagonist and then gets shot.. i liked the variations of characters and all, but.. dunno.. trying to help :P try making more varied fighting characters and longer fights and the storyline much clearer.. complicated isn't always better..
~Ch!m!c
Yeah, next one is going to be alot more fast paced / action. I've got it all planned out and characters are being drawn up.
Had a A material potential, ended up with a B-
The setting was great, the characters were great, the concept was also great. Yet the animation failed to carry out the full potential, I believe. The art also great too, still, I can't shake off the feeling that this could've been a spectacular animation, but it fell a bit short of expectation.
Animated well, but convoluted in Narrative.
Your art is great; the main problem is how convoluted the plot is. Your narrative is non-linear, which is fine if you do it right, but there was no particular order to your flashbacks and they were messy. The flashbacks were too much narration and not enough exposition of the more subtle kind.
The events are improbable, and time period seems undecided. How do you have Nazis existing in the same universe as supersoldiers wielding 21st century assault rifles, and why would two bounty hunter detectives from Nevada of all places be the ones to capture a mad scientist from Germany?
Also, while you explain the origin of the mad scientist and the woman who commands his forces, you give no explanation for the mouth guy or "pie bastard"--not even an improbability drive or plot device.
Also, it would have been nice to see some more spectacular fight sequences.
WTF
Hank J Wimbleton?
In here?
How?
and how come he's a pushover?