Reviews for TakeTwo - Beginning

[VelvetEagle]

Now that was original

Its good to see some originality put into newgrounds(I'm not saying that there isn't enough original animations just that there are too many cliche`d ones). I like the fact that you are trying to educate the masses with a little history. Of course this does need improvement like the previously mentioned mouth and how it doesn't move, but also you can shake it up. Take for example the news, at first they show the news person then they cut to some footage of the scene then cut back to the news person and so-on. You could do that by showing the announcer and the little tv screen than go to full screen with the picture and back and ta-da you have just made it more interesting by shaking it up instead of just sticking to the same image.

[gamesbond]

A Better Choice than Wikipedia but Duller

TakeTwo does have some great info and it did update me on the fact that Pong wasn't the first video game but it was the first commercially sold video game so that's pretty cool.

However, there isn't any action that engages me to watch the whole thing so it's a pity that the effort will go to waste.

[the-ad]

I suggest

Switching between that camera, which shows the whole "set," and also showing the video screen in full, as people wouldn't lose interest so much, and the video seems to be going to waste in such a tiny part of the screen.
Good otherwise, already knew all of that from G4 though ;D.

[7Demented]

Not bad.

HIghly Educational!!!! I think that you could've added something funny, thoguh.

[King-Danath]

I Gave You A 5

That doesn't happen too often. Especially with something that wasn't hilarious and didn't entertain me for more than 10 minutes. Great jorb there homestar (not being sarcastic, just random).

Nqkoi1 responds:

Watdya say Coach Z?