its ok
There was too much time in between lines, so it made it slow. Also the voice acting was a liiiitle down. But, then again, it had a funny story, I think that if you improve in the sound, the whole thing is gonna get improved.
Reviews for "MOAPAC - Episode 1"
RhysMus responds:
fair enough, we will improve on the sound a little down the track :D
we tried the best we could :)
lol
well I liked it
RhysMus responds:
and now i like you :)
I agree with the guy below
You put a lot of effort into this flash, it shows. ut the jokes about Barney, the gay-acchino guy and so forth stink of thought and effort, and lack the feeling of true natural humor translated into a fash episode... which I prefer.
In short it feels like you put on the shackles a bit to make this episode, as if you self governed yourselves. The humor, plotline and music at the end all feel contemprorary, and not in a great way.
-Good animation, good voiceovers, and nice cameos.
-Bad plot, thoughtful yet run-of-the-mill humor, premise and adventure needs improving.
If this 1st episode is just a platform on which to uild, then I look forward to your future additions to this series, but please do make them better. Thanks. ;)
6/10 3/5.
RhysMus responds:
yeah this episode was more of an introduction towards the characters.
thanks :D
It's ok
I can see you guys put some effort on it.I'm looking forward for this, it's got future.
RhysMus responds:
well we still have ep 2 and three in our minds :D so hopefully they will go sweet!
Needs improvement
There wasn't anything really all that funny in this flash. It was complete and utter nonsense. What you might want to do is to quicken it up a bit, it moved too slowly to hold any interest. Openers with character introductions done in the "generic flash series" way also was a bad choice, it would have been much better to have introduced them as it went on. In any case, there is plenty of improvement to be made and alot of potential to still tap into. I'm just not seeing it now.